scintilla10.livejournal.com ([identity profile] scintilla10.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lemanya 2009-09-11 06:22 pm (UTC)

Wow, very powerful! I particularly liked this line: Doors creaking, footsteps breaking, hearts hammering. Soundtrack of staccato rhythms. And this turn of phrase: a thousand stillborn skies.
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