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lemanyaprompt 11 on my table.
11. I believe Icarus was not failing as he fell/ But just coming to the end of his triumph.
R, 203 words, Post season 4 and slightly blasphemous.
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Our Father, who art in Heaven
Lucifer is risen.
Hallowed be thy name
Light. So much light. Death. So much death.
Thy Kingdom come, thy will-
Be done on earth
Doors creaking, footsteps breaking, hearts hammering. Soundtrack of staccato rhythms.
Ba-da-bing, ba-da-bing-bang-fucking-boom.
As it is in Heaven
Run.
Give us this day our daily bread
Run, run, run, as fast as you can.
And forgive us our sins
You can’t catch me I’m the King of the Damned.
Oh God, forgive us our sins
Tyres jolting, engine screaming, road short and unending.
Please…
Christ, with bullet holes in his hands and a bleeding mouth on his side:
I believe he screamed.
One thousand, four hundred and fifty one miles from Maryland to South Dakota.
Count them.
I believe in the Father, and in the Son
and in the broken, foul-mouthed Spirit.
So forgive us our sins
As He breaks, so shall It break.
And deliver us from evil.
It wasn’t your fault.
Yes Dean- it was.
No… it was mine.
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Date: 2009-09-10 02:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-09-10 02:29 pm (UTC)I couldn't think of an ending that was better than what I got.
Oh well. *shrugs*
x
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Date: 2009-09-10 11:19 pm (UTC)I love this. Like--a lot.
*mems*
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Date: 2009-09-11 01:44 am (UTC)I'm really glad you clicked it open, and liked it! And memming it!
Like, whoa.
*hugs*
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Date: 2009-09-11 06:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-09-12 09:55 am (UTC)They're my most liked lines as well.
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Date: 2009-09-11 06:56 pm (UTC)Thank you so much for sharing this. ♥
~Nebula
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Date: 2009-09-12 09:56 am (UTC)It my absolute pleasure :)
♥
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Date: 2009-09-18 11:30 pm (UTC)Cat
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Date: 2009-09-19 04:13 am (UTC)If he doesn't by mid season- I will find some way to punch him.
*crosses fingers and stokes the good luck statue*
And thanks for reading!
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Date: 2009-09-19 10:08 am (UTC)Cat
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Date: 2009-09-19 10:28 am (UTC)But I agree about the denial. I noticed (cause I saw the episode- and you were right, I loved it)that in some places it was like Dean was saying what he thought he should say rather than what he wanted to- like when Sam was talking about leaving, there was that pause and then Dean says "yeah, i think that's best" or whatever and I thought hang on... look at you and your face all conflicted... you don't really mean that!
But Dean is Dean. And yes, he's a little self-righteous, and he's totally transferring his feelings rather than owning up to them- but that's Dean. And something's going to happen that will jolt that boy back to intelligence and back to Sam and we can have our brother's back.
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Date: 2012-05-05 03:15 am (UTC)Beautifully crafted, thank you!
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